tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1539931874039654664.post1390353686112754097..comments2023-07-05T00:46:59.542+12:00Comments on Shawn: Cross CountryPES Blogs Administratorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17359536147314284796noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1539931874039654664.post-1784489435805953322012-08-30T10:34:21.980+12:002012-08-30T10:34:21.980+12:00Hi Shawn I really like your writing about Cross Co...Hi Shawn I really like your writing about Cross Country I enjoyed reading your post because it was something I loved I never knew that you were that talented at writing I always wanted to know what it would be like banging into a tree by mistake. I also liked the fascinating words like 'killing your buzz' and 'stopping the torture' and even that you said that it was gonna become a scrap. Keep up the great work Shawn.<br /><br />From Francis Francishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16852029627076303058noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1539931874039654664.post-39917871795774779582012-08-26T14:12:01.774+12:002012-08-26T14:12:01.774+12:00Hi Shawn
You are a very talented writer. I really...Hi Shawn<br /><br />You are a very talented writer. I really enjoyed reading this post, and I know that with a little extra careful proofreading and editing, it would have been perfect. I loved some of the vocab you used to describe the race e.g. 'ricocheting, whilst' and lines like: 'killing my buzz' and 'stopping the torture'. I can imagine that the cross country was quite painful for some. I also liked that way that you were focussed on completing this weeks writing task. Keep up the great work. <br /><br />Mrs LMrs Lagitupunoreply@blogger.com