Tuesday, July 31, 2012

Archery and Wrestling

Title:Archery
Brainstorm:,Strong,Focused,Stiff.bow and arrow.
Sentences:
1.The man precisely aimed at the target trying to get it.

2.As he puts his bow up the archer is trying to make his arrow soar through the air to get the target.

3.The archer is trying to win if not a gold then a medal.

4.The man is closely targeting the board.

5.The look on his face shows he is not playing around.



Title:Wrestling

Brainstorm:Strong,
Sentences:
1.The chinese man with his big muscles got the Albanian man into submission hold.

2. Meanwhile the other man is trying to escape from this submission hold.

3.Their expression on their face shows that this was hard.

4.The man in the red clearly looks like hes is the dominant wrestler.

5.As they clinched their teeth this close battle still continues.

Friday, July 20, 2012

Mathswhizz

This is how long I have been on mathswhizz for this week.

Joshua Losefa

Joshua Iosefa is a year 13 prefect at mt roskill grammar. His speech brown brother was very inspiring because of the way he used his words and put them into rhyming sentences. The one I liked was the part when he said “don't be afraid to be the first”. He is brown trying to tell people that just because people are a certain colour that you aren't better than them. His speech is a good example of what he knows brown people can be, and I think that if people listened to his words that they might make a change. I think that people look up to him not only as a prefect but as a person.